A story from Friday, April 5, 2013

In no time…

Dawn’s descent over cityscape. Gilded rooftops called him, named him. With no thought to impossibility or what might be left behind, he entered the painted sidewalk.

3 Critiques to "In no time…"

  1. The following was written by garry aernouts on April 5, 2013

    Nice job. Very descriptive and leaves me with so many questions: perhaps dawn ascends?

  2. The following was written by Dean on April 6, 2013

    I like it. Appealing imagery.

  3. The following was written by Jan Brown on April 15, 2013

    Lovely in a surreal sort of way. How tempting to walk into a glittering painting, on the sidewalks of a shining city and leave our troubles behind in this world. Well done!