A story from Friday, June 22, 2012

In Memory

He kept climbing as I yelled “no!” Now, in place of the tree, the roses my parents planted in memory, where I prick my finger and say “no.”

3 Critiques to "In Memory"

  1. The following was written by Jan B. on June 22, 2012

    Poignant, evokative of so many memories. Well done!

  2. The following was written by M Soufi on June 22, 2012

    Thanks Jan.

  3. The following was written by Janet on June 25, 2012

    So much emotion packed into such few words. Well done.