A story from Wednesday, February 13, 2013

I Give You My Heart

She’d given him a kidney years ago. Now she needed a heart. He called 911, told them everything they needed to know, & pulled the trigger.

10 Critiques to "I Give You My Heart"

  1. The following was written by @biscottidana on February 13, 2013

    Don’t worry, Mom, I just sent flowers this year….

  2. The following was written by Ian Russell on February 13, 2013

    I still think the authorities will be suspicious even though he told them he was going to shoot himself. He also had to be careful where he shot so as to not damage his heart.

  3. The following was written by Reader on February 13, 2013

    This is a fairly weak and improbable story. Surprised to see it make the cut here.

  4. The following was written by @joshuatpowers on February 13, 2013

    A true sign of love. The guy giving everything up for the girl just so she can be happy!

  5. The following was written by @wmbryan1 on February 13, 2013

    It seems that, in giving her his heart he would be breaking it as well.

  6. The following was written by Jennifer on February 14, 2013

    Someone mentioned that this was “improbable”, which it is, but is that not a factor in many stories?

    I thought it was really good. =)

  7. The following was written by Abby on February 14, 2013

    I think its a cute story, it’s got a lot of power to it if you actually open your mind. I love it!

  8. The following was written by Phil Hu on February 16, 2013

    I think this is a rehash of the movie, “John Q.”

  9. The following was written by your mom on February 16, 2013

    Awsome! It literly took my breath away.

  10. The following was written by Stephanie on February 18, 2013

    I think this is a true act of kindness. It’s always a beautiful thing to see people passing on good deeds. Although tragic, it is still touching.