A story from Tuesday, September 21, 2010

I’m sorry, leaves!

Every step was careful. Every crunch, a cringe. My son grimaced each time, as if he felt the pain he inflicted on these dry, autumn leaves.

3 Critiques to "I’m sorry, leaves!"

  1. The following was written by dana on September 21, 2010

    Sweet. It almost makes me look forward to a yard full of colorful leaves that I’ll have to rake up. Almost.

  2. The following was written by Jared on September 21, 2010

    The author captured the wonder of youth with the simple and honest scene.

  3. The following was written by Chicapie on November 2, 2010

    Beautiful! So descriptive and succinct.