A story from Friday, July 22, 2011

Homesick

The shimmering blue planet winked at her. “Dad, I wanna go home.” “When Earth has cooled, dear.” She kicked the moon dust and pouted.

7 Critiques to "Homesick"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on July 22, 2011

    Some things never change, do they? Whether you move across town or to the moon, someone always wants to go home. :)

    I loved the mood dust and pouty girl imagery. Well done!

  2. The following was written by Sam Webb on July 22, 2011

    I can just see her little pig tails and pouty face!

    Loved it.

  3. The following was written by Heather on July 22, 2011

    I am not a sci-fi fan, but I LOVED this. I can totally see that little girl in my head right now! This is one of my favorite 140 stories ever.

  4. The following was written by Tucker on July 22, 2011

    A great story to close out this wonderful week of sci-fi!

  5. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 22, 2011

    Well written, a wonderful mix of sci-fi and human nature.

  6. The following was written by Evert Asberg on July 23, 2011

    How sad

  7. The following was written by Pauline on August 2, 2011

    One of the best I’ve ever seen. Good job.