A story from Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Her Ending

Her family gathered, but by then she could no longer speak; just gazed at them with hungry eyes. She died in the night with no one watching.

5 Critiques to "Her Ending"

  1. The following was written by Tucker on April 19, 2011

    Powerful. Like a kick in the stomach. Nicely done.

  2. The following was written by Mtadams29 on April 19, 2011

    Killer words! Soooo good.

  3. The following was written by sharklanaid on April 19, 2011

    Wow. I love it!

  4. The following was written by Lisa Tang Liu on April 20, 2011

    Really poignant. She probably didn’t get to see her family together often. Well done.

  5. The following was written by Noisy Quiet on April 27, 2011

    Oh…. this is so sad. Unless she wanted no one watching.