Her family gathered, but by then she could no longer speak; just gazed at them with hungry eyes. She died in the night with no one watching.
Powerful. Like a kick in the stomach. Nicely done.
Killer words! Soooo good.
Wow. I love it!
Really poignant. She probably didn’t get to see her family together often. Well done.
Oh…. this is so sad. Unless she wanted no one watching.