A story from Friday, November 30, 2012


“Oh Lord,” she sighed. I am still not sure if she really was a believer. It doesn’t matter. For one short moment we were in heaven. Together.

2 Critiques to "Heaven"

  1. The following was written by Steve B on November 30, 2012

    Nice. Suggests an almost religious experience, let’s the reader fill in the blanks.

  2. The following was written by Christopher Ywoskus on February 6, 2013

    This is a very sweet post i enjioyed how emotions were not discouraged but instead shred and shared with two people who i assume loved eachother.