A story from Thursday, February 9, 2012

Happy Birthday!…(Not to Me)

Cake and debris littered the floor. Mascara ran in black rivers down my cheeks. My friends stood slack-jawed. Who wanted to turn 30 anyway?

3 Critiques to "Happy Birthday!…(Not to Me)"

  1. The following was written by Jennifer on February 9, 2012

    I don’t know how you captured a whole scene like that in so few words, but I definitely got the visual and the emotions of the birthday. Good job! =)

  2. The following was written by LoveTheBadGuy on February 9, 2012

    Great writing! Thanks for sharing.

  3. The following was written by Evert Asberg on February 11, 2012

    I wonder what will happen when you turn 40. Let us know!