A story from Thursday, August 26, 2010

Happiness and Jane

She’d doll up and catch the 7:05 train to the city so that businessmen could ogle her. The return home was always lonely and full of tears.

2 Critiques to "Happiness and Jane"

  1. The following was written by Maya on August 26, 2010

    Ambiguity makes this story interesting. You can imagine a hundred things that happened to her during the day.

  2. The following was written by jonas on August 26, 2010

    As always, nice work!