A story from Monday, September 3, 2012

Greed

Ship-wrecked, starving, desperate. He steals the last water-bottle and runs. Six miles later, he chokes on salt-water. Beaten to the punch.

3 Critiques to "Greed"

  1. The following was written by ChrisWhiteWrites on September 3, 2012

    Ah, M. le Bad Guy, it was beautifully crafted – I loved the twist at the end, didn’t see it coming.

    And the pacing of the piece…

  2. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on September 4, 2012

    Thank you very much, Chris!
    Fancy seeing you ’round these parts… 😉

  3. The following was written by ChrisWhiteWrites on September 5, 2012

    I follow 140 Fiction on Twitter and around midnight on Saturn’s Day I saw the name of one my Interfriend’s name pop up in ny feed I loved this piece. As usual.