A story from Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Gentleman

I saw her in the parking lot, visibly shaken. I comforted her like a gentleman. But I was also hungry, so I grabbed her purse and ran.

2 Critiques to "Gentleman"

  1. The following was written by Von Rupert on May 30, 2013

    Nice work on this. The twist at the end is perfect. :) Tight writing.

  2. The following was written by Pratibha on May 31, 2013

    Thank you, Von.

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