Daddy isn’t fair, taking my cell away like that. I’ll show him. When the sleek car pulls up, I reveal my white thigh and wait to be let in.
Oh! Ouch! That one hurt. Such a scary situation, but really, that’s how many young teens think.
Thank YOU, Amy for commenting. You kind of lead me here. I found this site because Rose posted a link to your awesome Fiction 140 story about the dad and the bar and the tattling–I loved that! (BTW, it’s me, Yvonne from F2K. )
A powerful story. Nicely done.
Great story, great setup, strong ending. The typical teenage girl – quite sad really.
Yvonne! Yay! Glad you’re here. I saw “Von” and wondered if it might be you.
Your story is such a punch in the gut – Love it!