A story from Tuesday, May 17, 2011

First Kiss

Slowly the would-be lovers leaned in. Contact brought sparks. She jerked back, hurt. “Sorry,” he said, removing the crushed cigarette butt.

  • written by: <span class="post-meta-key">William Weldy</span>

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