A story from Monday, September 19, 2011

First Fall

I tiptoed to the crib and whispered in baby Joey’s ear. “Can you feel it? Fall’s here and I can’t wait to jump in the leaves with you.”

5 Critiques to "First Fall"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 19, 2011

    So nice! It brought with it thoughts of the smell of autumn leaves, the crackle when they’re stepped on, and the chill in the air. All things baby Joey will learn in years to come.

  2. The following was written by April on September 19, 2011

    Aww…that’s just so sweet :) I think kids and autumn leaves are a memory all parents enjoy. Good job!

  3. The following was written by Jan B. on September 20, 2011

    Always enjoy Sam Webb’s stories. They never fail to satisfy.

  4. The following was written by Lydia Gray on September 20, 2011

    Such a lovely story, filled with promises for the future.

  5. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 21, 2011

    A touching story, the joy of parenthood captured in a sentnce.

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