A story from Friday, March 22, 2013

First and Last Stop

She’s on the school bus. She crouches low in back. The driver doesn’t see her. She’ll stay here all night. It’s warmer than at home.

One Critique of "First and Last Stop"

  1. The following was written by Angel Zapata on April 10, 2013

    This breaks my heart. Well done. Props for also managing to create your tale as a 5×5: a 25-word story told in 5 sentences of 5 words ea.