A story from Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Fatal Distraction

Still talking on his cell, the groom-to-be stepped from the curb unaware of the oncoming car. “Tomorrow’s the big day” he chimed. It wasn’t.

4 Critiques to "Fatal Distraction"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on July 27, 2011

    Ouch! That one hurt. The last two words were a punch in the gut. Great job!

  2. The following was written by SLMyshell on July 27, 2011

    Awesome! Scary how many people I know that are that consumed with thier phone instead of the world. Chock full of emotion!

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 28, 2011

    A fantastic title and a great set up as well as an important warning.

  4. The following was written by John Tansey on July 28, 2011

    My feelings exactly. Great story.