A story from Thursday, May 12, 2011

Expecting

He would never think to count the weeks. With each contraction she squeezes his hand and prays that it will be born the right color.

7 Critiques to "Expecting"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 12, 2011

    A large story in a small space; a comedic tragedy.

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on May 12, 2011

    Oh! Ouch! Well done!

  3. The following was written by Maya on May 12, 2011

    This really packs a punch! Well done, Kim!

  4. The following was written by Joe on May 12, 2011

    Wow. Drove a stake through my heart. Now that’s how you do it!

  5. The following was written by Kim Tatam on May 12, 2011

    Thanks for your generous comments!

  6. The following was written by Evert Asberg on May 15, 2011

    Thrilling!

  7. The following was written by Cygnus on April 15, 2013

    That was one gasp-inducing conclusion. Wow!