A story from Monday, April 23, 2012


In February he blamed the ice, in April his boat, in June the lake. Then his back, then his car, then his job, then his time. Then she knew.

One Critique of "Excuses"

  1. The following was written by Mary Soufi on April 23, 2012

    I can’t critique this as the author. I’m just posting here to remove the anonymity of the Twitter handle.
    Another fun contest–with a 420 character limit–is at Studio 360. You can Google it with my name to read a story that won.