Having captured my soul, made me shiver, want, feel, lust, having blossomed before my eyes, offered everything and nothing, she was gone.
Spot on description. Really nice.
Like always…everything (and nothing?) simply said. Everybody can relate to 22 words when they are put just in the right order!
I enjoyed it (a lot, actually), but I’m not a fan of the “everything and nothing” part. In general dualities like that kind of ring hollow and seem to be an easy way to grasp at depth without really saying anything.