A story from Monday, January 24, 2011

Ephemeral

Having captured my soul, made me shiver, want, feel, lust, having blossomed before my eyes, offered everything and nothing, she was gone.

3 Critiques to "Ephemeral"

  1. The following was written by Jess M. on January 24, 2011

    Spot on description. Really nice.

  2. The following was written by Tryys on January 24, 2011

    Like always…everything (and nothing?) simply said. Everybody can relate to 22 words when they are put just in the right order!
    Thx

  3. The following was written by Peter on January 24, 2011

    I enjoyed it (a lot, actually), but I’m not a fan of the “everything and nothing” part. In general dualities like that kind of ring hollow and seem to be an easy way to grasp at depth without really saying anything.