A story from Friday, August 5, 2011

End of Summer

Adirondack chairs abandoned lakeside. Kayaks tied to the car roof. Tweens puff on stolen cigarettes, plot to run away together.

10 Critiques to "End of Summer"

  1. The following was written by Stacy Post on August 5, 2011

    Thank you, One Forty Fiction. Here’s a link to the first piece you accepted. (I didn’t have a Twitter account then.) http://www.onefortyfiction.com/archives/spring-love

  2. The following was written by Cathy on August 5, 2011

    Perfect title. Makes me feel 14 again. In a sweet, kind of sad way.

  3. The following was written by Madeline Mora-Summonte on August 5, 2011

    Well done, Stacy! Definitely has that “end of summer” feel to it.

  4. The following was written by Stacy Post on August 5, 2011

    Thanks for stopping by to check it out, Cathy and Madeline. Much appreciated!

  5. The following was written by Amy Tripp on August 5, 2011

    Gosh, that brings back memories. Well done!

  6. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 5, 2011

    A perfect example of using words to show and not tell. Great visuals. Well done.

  7. The following was written by Stacy Post on August 5, 2011

    Thank you, Amy and Gayle!

  8. The following was written by Connie Wildey on August 5, 2011

    At first I didn’t get it that the entire story was the cryptic 3 lines until I read what the website was about. “End of Summer” is great and captures the feelings of the end of summer vacation.

  9. The following was written by Cathy Shouse on August 5, 2011

    Love it! It does make me sad, though. Summer, please don’t go! :(

  10. The following was written by Stacy Post on August 8, 2011

    Thanks for checking it out, Connie and Cathy! Much appreciated!

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