A story from Thursday, March 22, 2012

Embarrassing

Red words: Occupied. Oops, too late!

4 Critiques to "Embarrassing"

  1. The following was written by Kristin on March 22, 2012

    Funny. Crazy. A little bit mad.

  2. The following was written by Ben Mines on March 22, 2012

    In six words!

    That’s quite an accomplishment.

    You may already have heard how Hemingway was once challenged to prove his boast that he could tell a story in six words. It was,

    For sale: Baby shoes. Never used.

  3. The following was written by Jennifer Delaney on March 22, 2012

    I have, indeed, heard of it! Very famous and one of my favourites. It was where I found the inspiration to start experimenting with the shorter variety of stories. I’d never heard of flash fiction and the idea of a story in six words really appealed to me. It was a new challenge beyond the normal “Write a story” choice that encourages authors to really think about the word choice and the small nitty gritty bits … and I do love a good challenge!

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on March 22, 2012

    Six word stories can be challenging, but you get the story across well in this one.