A story from Monday, June 6, 2011

Elemental Guidance

Harry stood on the ledge. He dared to ask the winds of Destiny for advice. They acted forcefully and effectively. No more Harry on the ledge.

4 Critiques to "Elemental Guidance"

  1. The following was written by Maya on June 6, 2011

    Apt title. It is a great story, but I feel that the last sentence is unnecessary.

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on June 6, 2011

    A dark story but effective. Poor Harry never learned the axiom: Don’t ask the question if you really don’t want to know the answer.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 7, 2011

    Good for a giggle, but perhaps the winds of Destiny would not have been so harsh with poor Harry had they been the Winds of Destiny.

  4. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 7, 2011

    Makes me wonder what advice, exactly, he was seeking. Well done!