A story from Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Drift

She photographed the water accumulating in the bottom of her dory, wondered why she left her lifevest in her car, and began paddling ashore.

2 Critiques to "Drift"

  1. The following was written by redsaid1 on October 5, 2010

    I love how she takes the time to take a snapshot of the flooding dory first, THEN think about her lifevest and about getting back to shore! Aesthetics above life!

    Well done. The photography reference is apt, because I can picture the entire scene in my mind’s eye.

  2. The following was written by jasmin on October 5, 2010

    I can sense the frustration and amusement at the situation. Was she posting the image on Twitter?