A story from Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Doorbell

Doorbell. It’s them. I’m sure. Come to deliver the news. Tuesday. Closed-casket. Wear black. When I see the postman I laugh so hard I cry.

3 Critiques to "Doorbell"

  1. The following was written by Kim McCully-Mobley on January 10, 2013

    Wow. This is truly haunting. The postman comment sure throws me a curve. Would love to see the sequel!

  2. The following was written by Jan Brown on January 12, 2013

    Great story told in short bursts, rythmically, followed by a terrific ending! Very well done.

  3. The following was written by Stephanie Christian on January 15, 2013

    Awesome! I love this. I have never read something so touching and phenomenal in my life.