A story from Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Don’t Touch the Floor

“The floor is lava!” the boys cheer, leaping on couches. A single smirk; a spell softly spoken. Child-bearing chairs ooze into the eruption.

3 Critiques to "Don’t Touch the Floor"

  1. The following was written by Olivia on January 31, 2013

    This is cute and imaginative.

  2. The following was written by jessica on January 31, 2013

    This reminded me of how easy it is for children to be entertained. So simple but fun when the imagination can do.

  3. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on February 13, 2013

    Thank you both for commenting. :)

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