A story from Monday, November 5, 2012

Distracted

After such a long day, Jen tuned out all the honking and yelling as she entered the freeway. Then she noticed the baby seat was missing.

2 Critiques to "Distracted"

  1. The following was written by Janet Cannon on November 5, 2012

    Ouch. In so many ways. I could see this as a parent’s worst nightmare. Good job!

  2. The following was written by Paul Buelna on November 14, 2012

    Good lord…..brilliant