A story from Monday, January 17, 2011

Disaster Date

He took her to a vegan diner because she was a health nut. After lunch they walked barefoot on the beach. She chucked rocks at seagulls.

4 Critiques to "Disaster Date"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 18, 2011

    What a great illustration of irony.

  2. The following was written by Treeleaning on January 18, 2011

    I really like this. I can see it played out in a One Forty Movie! Sweet nothings at the restaurant, holding hands along the beach, sandals swinging from her other hand, sunlight on the waves and the seagulls screaming overhead.

  3. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on January 26, 2011

    Great character piece. :)

  4. The following was written by dana on March 28, 2011

    A One Forty Movie? That would be a great idea! And this would make an awesome script for it.