A story from Monday, April 4, 2011

Despatched

Hot damn! A mail-order bride! Harris placed his order. She arrived a fortnight later, but it didn’t work out. They’d forgotten air-holes.

4 Critiques to "Despatched"

  1. The following was written by dana on April 5, 2011

    Caught me off guard and made me laugh. Thanks for that!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on April 5, 2011

    A snappy piece of humour. Much appreciated at the end of a long day.

  3. The following was written by EC Sheedy on May 4, 2011

    Ha Ha. Way to go! Gayle said, “Snappy.” I agree.

  4. The following was written by Pauline on May 5, 2011

    I found the last line chilling. It contained a lot of information in one short sentence.