A story from Monday, June 25, 2012

Dance Off

It was a dance-off at first sight. He hopped, skipped and leap frogged into her heart. She pirouetted into his. Both went home, winners.

2 Critiques to "Dance Off"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 26, 2012

    It sounds a bit like little athletics meets Swan Lake. It provokes the imagination; well done.

  2. The following was written by su on June 26, 2012

    beautiful!