“Table for four,” John said brightly. His daughter looked crestfallen. His son just sighed and held up three fingers to the waitress.
Wow! You created an entire universe and took us into the heads of three characters all with such a small number of words. Bravo!
But, oh, is this heartbreaking! *sniffs*
Well done. The conclusion of this story is a tragic twist, proving that even a story in 140n characters can tug at our emotions.
Ouch. This stung my eyes hard and fast with tears. My Papa lives with Alzheimer’s and this 140 word story packs a punch. Superb.
A powerful story in so few words. A great ending that really tugged at the emotions. A great read. Thanks.