A story from Monday, February 11, 2013

Cut from the Bush

He gave her red roses on their first date and sixty years later he lays roses at her grave. The flowers wilt, as does he without her.

2 Critiques to "Cut from the Bush"

  1. The following was written by Phil Hu on February 11, 2013

    Very well done. Sentimental, but not reliant upon sentimentality. Tough fence to straddle but you did it just fine.

  2. The following was written by @biscottidana on February 12, 2013

    So sad, and yet so wonderfully affirmative: that 60 years later he’s still in love with her. Well done.