A story from Monday, August 30, 2010

Crush

He was the school hunk. She mined beneath his desk for chewing gum. If she believed it hard enough, she was kissing him for real.

5 Critiques to "Crush"

  1. The following was written by Elroy Tate on August 30, 2010

    Awesome.

  2. The following was written by Cath Barton on August 30, 2010

    Good one

  3. The following was written by dana on August 30, 2010

    Gross! (I’m laughing as I type this though, so well done writer!)

  4. The following was written by cassie on August 31, 2010

    not sure about the word ‘hunk’ but otherwise fantastic.

  5. The following was written by simon a sylvester on September 7, 2010

    Thanks all – more stories daily on my Twitter feed.