A story from Monday, June 13, 2011

Clean Sweep

The door slammed, echoing down the long hall. Dad and I both gasped and quickly swept up the crumbs. The cookie monsters were home.

6 Critiques to "Clean Sweep"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 13, 2011

    LOL! It sounds as if the cookie monsters might have already been home. Great job!

  2. The following was written by Maya on June 13, 2011

    What a sweet childhood memory! The dad sounds so much like my dad!

  3. The following was written by Jennifer wright on June 13, 2011

    Nice!

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 13, 2011

    Well done; you have really captured the bond between father and child.

  5. The following was written by Jan B. on June 13, 2011

    Great story! Gotta love those cookie monsters…and a good natured Dad!

  6. The following was written by Alice Folkart on June 14, 2011

    Perfect way for daughters to bond with dads. Nice picture.