A story from Tuesday, July 5, 2011

Civil Disobedience

After they finished searching our home, I pulled up the flooring to check in on the boys. Natural-born children were illegal. I didn’t care.

5 Critiques to "Civil Disobedience"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on July 5, 2011

    Great job! A futuristic scenario that, unfortunately, hearkens back to past governments, policies, and racims. Chilling.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 6, 2011

    Well set up; straight into the crisis, with a great conclusion.

  3. The following was written by Von Rupert on July 13, 2011

    What a nice read!! Great characterization in just a few words.

  4. The following was written by Joe Schuster on July 18, 2011

    It’s amazing what a good writer can do in a small space. This story packs an emotional wallop although it’s only 140 characters long.

  5. The following was written by Pauline on August 2, 2011

    It reminded me of Big Brother is watching, and intruding on individual’s private lives. It is indeed chilling and could begin a much longer story.