After they finished searching our home, I pulled up the flooring to check in on the boys. Natural-born children were illegal. I didn’t care.
Great job! A futuristic scenario that, unfortunately, hearkens back to past governments, policies, and racims. Chilling.
Well set up; straight into the crisis, with a great conclusion.
What a nice read!! Great characterization in just a few words.
It’s amazing what a good writer can do in a small space. This story packs an emotional wallop although it’s only 140 characters long.
It reminded me of Big Brother is watching, and intruding on individual’s private lives. It is indeed chilling and could begin a much longer story.