3 Critiques to "Christmas Elf"

1. Ben's critique:

   I’m impressed that you succeeded in compressing a twist into 140-odd characters.

   This critique was added on January 26, 2012 at 7:41 am

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2. Von's critique:

   Incredible story!!!! That last line hit me right in the gut.

   This critique was added on January 26, 2012 at 10:47 am

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3. Gayle Beveridge's critique:

   How sad, a sleazy club, the destination for so many who run away from home.

   This critique was added on January 27, 2012 at 1:32 am

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