A story from Thursday, January 26, 2012

Christmas Elf

Christmas music fills the air. The elf frolics and dances to happy applause, but she’s not happy. The men drool, and the metal pole is cold.

3 Critiques to "Christmas Elf"

  1. The following was written by Ben on January 26, 2012

    I’m impressed that you succeeded in compressing a twist into 140-odd characters.

  2. The following was written by Von on January 26, 2012

    Incredible story!!!! That last line hit me right in the gut.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 27, 2012

    How sad, a sleazy club, the destination for so many who run away from home.

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