A story from Friday, May 27, 2011

Chloe

I look at the picture and laugh. It took a month to get to the point of laughter instead of tears. My heart swells. I can never replace her.

5 Critiques to "Chloe"

  1. The following was written by John Tucker on May 27, 2011

    Sad, but uplifting. Nicely done.

  2. The following was written by Shannon Linden on May 27, 2011

    Lovely work from a lovely person!

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 28, 2011

    This really tugs at the heart; I wasn’t expecting that when I read the first sentence. Lovely twist.

  4. The following was written by Sylvia Olson on May 28, 2011

    So much emotion in so few words. Well done.

  5. The following was written by Amy Tripp on May 31, 2011

    Heartbreaking! Very well written.