A story from Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Check for Monsters

“Check for monsters,” she used to say. “In the cupboard. Under the bed.” It never occurred to her that the monster was the person checking.

3 Critiques to "Check for Monsters"

  1. The following was written by Jennifer on December 9, 2011

    Very eerie. I could totally imagine a whole story in these few lines. Nicely done!

  2. The following was written by Evert Asberg on December 12, 2011

    well done

  3. The following was written by Lovely_Lici on January 4, 2012

    Wow. I like the twist.