The skiff, bobbing; the ocean, placid; the squall, sudden; the wave, monstrous; the water, frigid. The dolphin: a friendly deus ex machina.
Great vocabulary. Fun to read.
Curious. Are you calling the dolphin a machine
or a miracle of God? I can see both possibilities.
The punctuation makes this pop. THANKS!
Oooh, I really like this! It’s very clever, and I love the rhythm of your short sentences.
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