A story from Monday, November 26, 2012

Cetacean Savior

The skiff, bobbing; the ocean, placid; the squall, sudden; the wave, monstrous; the water, frigid. The dolphin: a friendly deus ex machina.

2 Critiques to "Cetacean Savior"

  1. The following was written by Kim McCully-Mobley on November 26, 2012

    Great vocabulary. Fun to read.
    Curious. Are you calling the dolphin a machine
    or a miracle of God? I can see both possibilities.
    The punctuation makes this pop. THANKS!

  2. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on November 27, 2012

    Oooh, I really like this! It’s very clever, and I love the rhythm of your short sentences.

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