A story from Friday, August 13, 2010

Carousel

The children squealed with delight. The grandparents wheezed and thanked their lucky stars to be alive. They paid a token for one more ride.

2 Critiques to "Carousel"

  1. The following was written by Maya on August 13, 2010

    I liked this carousel. Family, joy, sickness, courage, and hope all rolled up in one unit, ready for a ride! Congrats!

  2. The following was written by dana on August 17, 2010

    I also enjoyed this story for it’s heartwarming snapshot of grandparents & grandkids enjoying each other and life. Well done.