A story from Monday, June 11, 2012

Buyer’s Remorse

He noticed the bridesmaid’s cleavage, her legs. Pondering if he’d have a chance with her, he looked up as his bride started down the aisle.

5 Critiques to "Buyer’s Remorse"

  1. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on June 11, 2012

    Haha, fantastic twist! And I love the title. Really well done.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 12, 2012

    Oh, that’s so funny.

  3. The following was written by Jan B. on June 12, 2012

    Gah! Men! (Well done, Bill!)

  4. The following was written by Chrystie on June 18, 2012

    Oh wow! Love it.

  5. The following was written by Rasana Atreya on June 19, 2012

    This is too funny! :-)