A story from Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Brotherly Love

The monster oozes from the closet, slinks past Tim’s bed to Jon’s. It pulses wetly. Jon sobs, “No, Timmy!” It writhes, slurps. Tim smiles.

3 Critiques to "Brotherly Love"

  1. The following was written by Julie Flanders on May 7, 2013

    Tim seems like a little psychopath! Yikes!

  2. The following was written by Suzi on May 8, 2013

    OMG. Love this.

  3. The following was written by James Kelly on May 8, 2013

    The names are different, but that sounds like my brother trying to scare me. My other brother would pounce, end of monster! Ha Ha!

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