A story from Thursday, November 4, 2010

Briefs Encounter

He was gone. Her underwear drawer was empty. Her mother was right. All he wanted was to get into her pants.

4 Critiques to "Briefs Encounter"

  1. The following was written by Mike on November 4, 2010

    Great story! Nice build up and a superb twist.

  2. The following was written by Raleen on November 4, 2010

    Thank you, Mike. So appreciated.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on November 4, 2010

    Very clever; a most unexpected ending.

  4. The following was written by Cath Barton on November 4, 2010

    That’s good. Taut.