A story from Friday, November 9, 2012

Break Up

Sometimes, while you sleep, I turn away and face the empty wall. I’ve thought about putting up a poster, but I don’t really plan on staying much longer anyway.

2 Critiques to "Break Up"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on November 9, 2012

    A tragic sadness, effectively portrayed.

  2. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on November 13, 2012

    Very cynical and sad. Wonderful job!