A story from Wednesday, July 25, 2012

“Bob”bitized

You need a short bob, the stylist purred to her. A frisson of ecstasy swept over him as her long, lustrous locks began piling on the floor.

2 Critiques to "“Bob”bitized"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 25, 2012

    A surprising story. The first sentence sets the tone, but so subtlety the reader might be heard to exclaim ‘Ah ha’ as they are swept away by the second. Also a little erotic, so very much in keeping with current trends.

  2. The following was written by Chandni on July 26, 2012

    Nice! Seems to hint at things to come…