A story from Monday, November 14, 2011

Blindness

His grimy hands are all over my body. I scream, “Don’t do this?” Years later he’s on trial; my mother blind to reality sings his praises.

6 Critiques to "Blindness"

  1. The following was written by Karen Rice on November 14, 2011

    Painfully real & accurate. Good writing, Pat.

  2. The following was written by M. Elaine Moore on November 14, 2011

    Ghastly and powerful. And sadly, so very true for so many.

  3. The following was written by Barry Basden on November 14, 2011

    Stark. Real…Mothers, what do they know? Wonderful job, Pat.

  4. The following was written by Rocky Balboa on November 14, 2011

    Very interesting yet disturbing at the same time. Makes me want to shower repeatedly.

  5. The following was written by fictionaddict on November 14, 2011

    A lot of impact in such a short phrase. I agree with the disturbing portion but it is a reality far too often.

  6. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 15, 2011

    A stark reminder of what really does go on behind too many doors.