He rode, dodging people, cars, all none the wiser, and stopped inches from me. “How’d you do that?” He smiled. “I hear the edges of things.”
I love how that last line opens a world of possibilities. Great job!
Last line is really killer. Beautifully, poetically phrased, but also just a statement of fact from his POV. Really loved this one.
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