A story from Thursday, June 9, 2011

Blind

He rode, dodging people, cars, all none the wiser, and stopped inches from me. “How’d you do that?” He smiled. “I hear the edges of things.”

2 Critiques to "Blind"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 9, 2011

    I love how that last line opens a world of possibilities. Great job!

  2. The following was written by Tucker on June 9, 2011

    Last line is really killer. Beautifully, poetically phrased, but also just a statement of fact from his POV. Really loved this one.

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