A story from Thursday, August 11, 2011

Bitter Rivals

All I had to do was grab the outstretched fingers. He begged me to help. I smiled and walked slowly away. I knew she would soon forget him.

3 Critiques to "Bitter Rivals"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on August 11, 2011

    Whew! An emotional punch with this one. I like that the MC walked away *slowly*. Nice job!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 11, 2011

    A sinister story that packs quite a punch.

  3. The following was written by Jennifer K. Oliver on August 11, 2011

    Nicely done, and very creepy.

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