A story from Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Birthday Wish

Gathering around the cake to blow off the twenty-six candles, we try to feel his presence by standing close to his empty seat.

2 Critiques to "Birthday Wish"

  1. The following was written by vitali on January 18, 2011

    So much feelings waiting to be discovered…in your writing.
    Thank you Debbi.

  2. The following was written by Tucker on January 18, 2011

    I really loved this piece. The number 26 was well-chosen, it gives the mind plenty of “wiggle room” to wonder at what age the death occurred. Was it last year? Was it when he was 5? I like the not-knowing.