A story from Friday, July 27, 2012

Birthday girl

She noticed the row of frosting-laced cupcakes in the fridge. They were gorgeous. Like every year, nobody had showed up for her party.

2 Critiques to "Birthday girl"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 28, 2012

    The set up of this story is good. We think she is anticipating a party and this makes her disappointment all the more real.

  2. The following was written by Tejal Bhamre on July 28, 2012

    Thanks Gayle!