Jen sings in the shower. Talons click closer. Unseen breath shudders the curtain. She shuts the spray. Hears dripping. Not water. Saliva.
A horror story in the space f a tweet is not an easy task but you have done it well. That final one word sentence packs quite a punch.
Ouch! (The absent sound of the stopped water … sounds painful).
Very effective, and timely for Halloween week!
Yikes, this is a creepy story. I’m so impressed with how frightening you were able to make it in so few words. I’m just about to hop in the shower and I’m kind of nervous now. Well done!