A story from Monday, October 29, 2012

Behind the Curtain

Jen sings in the shower. Talons click closer. Unseen breath shudders the curtain. She shuts the spray. Hears dripping. Not water. Saliva.

4 Critiques to "Behind the Curtain"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 29, 2012

    A horror story in the space f a tweet is not an easy task but you have done it well. That final one word sentence packs quite a punch.

  2. The following was written by Yaw Busia on October 29, 2012

    Ouch! (The absent sound of the stopped water … sounds painful).

  3. The following was written by Jan Brown on October 29, 2012

    Very effective, and timely for Halloween week!

  4. The following was written by Julie Flanders on October 29, 2012

    Yikes, this is a creepy story. I’m so impressed with how frightening you were able to make it in so few words. I’m just about to hop in the shower and I’m kind of nervous now. Well done!